Home > Uncategorized > Blog 9: Political Involvement Online
  1. April 14, 2011 at 2:52 pm

    Good. Your writing is getting more concise. But you can still push it further. Don’t say “I do believe” or “I dare to say,” just say your point without a qualification. The first sentence of your last paragraph can simply be, “Both forms of activity are effective if used properly.” Keep it up.

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